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Trabalho de ingles

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:37 am
by Myrah
Portuguese:A minha professora de inglês mandou-nos fazer um trabalho de ingles e fazer post em um site de penpals.
Mas por certos motivos nao tenciono criar essa conta.
Comentem o meu texto!

English:My english teacher told us to make a english work to post on penpals. But for some reason i dont want to create account. Comment my text! )
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Hello, my name is Cláudio and I am twenty years old. I study at Ensiguarda(http://www.ensiguarda.pt) and my goal is to finish this course and start working after that. My passion is computers and I work with them since I was twelve years old. My Course is IT Technician which is hard for those who don´t know anything about computers.
For me, at this moment, the course is going good and I wish the same for the following years.
Thats all about me.
Thanks for reading my text, hope you like it.
Good Bye.
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:help:

Re: Trabalho de ingles

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:45 am
by Tensu
Myrah wrote:Portuguese:A minha professora de inglês mandou-nos fazer um trabalho de ingles e fazer post em um site de penpals.
Mas por certos motivos nao tenciono criar essa conta.
Comentem o meu texto!

English:My english teacher told us to make a english work to post on penpals. But for some reason i dont want to create account. Comment my text! )
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Hello, my name is Cláudio and I am twenty years old. I study at Ensiguarda(http://www.ensiguarda.pt) and my goal is to finish this course and start working after that. My passion is computers and I work with them since I was twelve years old. My Course is IT Technician which is hard for does who don´t know anything about computers.
For me, at this moment, the course is going good and I wish the same for the following years.
Thats all about me.
Thanks for reading my text, hope you like it.
Good Bye.
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:help:


does is wrong there for sure... i think "those" might be right
the sentece looks quit weird (and unfinished)... do u mean u want to keep getting same results?

i mgith be wrong tho... maybe need some1 who knows better english then me to check this out

Re: Trabalho de ingles

Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:44 pm
by junior
caraio...tinha q ser isso?